spider man narrative writing

Once upon a time there was a man named Peter and he had a good friend named jackson. When he went to Peter he started acting strange like he was being controlled by an evil man.





When Peter went away he sneaked into a private lab and he found some green blood and when he saw it he took some of it and put it inside him.





When he put it inside him he suddenly felt weird as his body was changing into something that he had never seen before. After that he was about to hallucinate so he quickly ran to a random suit and the suit revived him.








After that he sneakily took peter girlfriend and when he dropped her he jumped and he shooted his spider webs and as soon she was about to get crushed from the floor his web shooters got her just in time but when he went down to get her he realized she got a big shock and died like a heart attack.