my narrative writing

when i went to explore in italy i heard so many news and they were played at the same time. After that i heard someone breaking some glass and i said to myself is someone robbing on a good day. I called the police as soon as i can and when they came the guy that stole the painting got scared so he went to a cornered place and was hiding from the police.





After that i went to look for the man that was hiding and suddenly i heard someone breathing heavily and when i followed that sound i found the guy who stole the painting so i quietly sneaked up to him and ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! . After that the guy went to jail for good.